Hi!
Sizing of pendants is very personal, to this day I often am not sure what size is best for my own designs
But I think your current sizing fits this pendant, it's about the size of a two euro coin I think (don't have any at hand) ?
And depending on your perspective everything is simple..
Anyway, I like it
Looks like the loop is about 5 mm, with 2 thickness?
It is likely to be fine, but at this orientation you will need a split ring to attach it to a necklace, or it would hang sideways.
Not a problem perse and production prefers the loop to be oriented flat.
I think thickness wise you should be fine too, there are some additional (more relaxed) rules for smaller steel items, but there are no real guarantees.
That said, if it is rejected or fails in production, you get a voucher or refund, so you can try again.
Flat object might slightly warp, but I lack experience with that as I have not really printed anything flat yet in steel.
Some other tips, as you see in the preview render on the site, the model is quite "faceted", you can see the edges of the faces making op the rounder parts. (especially the loop, but also the round rim on the disc)
While Steel is polished, it's best to have the surface as smooth as possible.
Most software has tessellation or subdivision modifiers to do this.
It's helpful to turn of any smoothing shader in your modelling app, or use meshlab to view your model to see if you can clearly see the faces.
Cheers,
Stijn